Sharlea's last golden gleam __3D

I like the colors and feel of this artwork. My main problem with it is her pose, it looks really awkward and painful to be in. If her legs were different, like she was running, it might work then. Or maybe have her standing upright instead of leaning out so far. Try acting out the pose yourself to get a more natural feeling to it.

Only other thing is that her clothes kinda look painted on and not like actual clothing. Try looking up reference bodysuits or bathing suits to see how tighter clothing works on the body.

Hope this helped!